I feel as though this picture can
represent Steven’s story. Through his experiment, he comes to find that
appearance does play a role in how people treat one another. By having a
mullet, he changed his identity, similar to how one would in a play, knowing it
was not a permanent change. There may have been times where he got lost in his
character though, and allowed himself to be hurt by how others were treating
him. I think it would benefit the essay if Steven incorporated dialogue or
deeper descriptions of people’s reactions to his hair and then also deeper
descriptions of how it made him feel. How did it feel to be treated differently
by his lifelong friends? How did he feel about himself while sporting the
mullet?
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