Carlie’s article
was about straightening out priorities, but I also believe it was about finding
your true identity. When she was younger, she allowed others ideas to cloud her
own. She would rather follow the trend than go after what she really loved. I
chose this song to represent Carlie’s collage because it talks about losing yourself.
At a young age, before you have priorities straight you follow those around you,
“Washing what you know out to sea, you can see your life out the window.” It is
as if the things you want and belief are washing away. But with time, you find
yourself and are comfortable being who you are. I thought this was a very
interesting paper. I would like to see it come more full circle, maybe tying in
school supplies at some point in the end. Also, I think if you are trying to
show priorities in each section, a few were unclear. Overall, good job!
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